This is my partner and I poster about persuading people to buy a Hover bike. This shows that we have been doing and learning about Hover bikes. We were told first that we needed to create a poster using Google drawing and work collaboratively to make other people want to buy our Hover bike.
Well done Evelyn. I can see clearly which persuasive language features you have used to hook your audience in but when I read your blurb I see that you haven't drawn our attention to them. Please reword your blurb so that it identifies the persuasive language features that you used. This will help your readers make a stronger connection to your task.
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