Imagine you built an awesome tree house
If I had a big tree house I will invite my friends over and cook some yummy food. Then tell my friends if they want a sleep over then we can go and have a good time playing on my fun pool. Because it is a wonderful place were to be because having time with my friends and we will take some pictures and put it in my room.
Here is my amazing Tree House!!!!!!!!!
Here is my amazing Tree House!!!!!!!!!
Good try Evelyn. You have some interesting ideas and describing words. You need to think very carefully about our focus: sentences. Remember they need to have only one or two ideas, make sense and have a capital letter and fullstop.
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