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Tuesday, 1 March 2016

DRAFT in our writing


LI: To write a stretched sentence.

Who:  The old man smiled.
What: The old man smiled happily .
When: As the sun rose up the old man smiled happily.
Where: As the sun rose up the old  man smiled happily at home.
Why: As the sun rose up the old man smiled happily at home waiting for the sun to shine bright.

Story: As the sun rose up the old man smiled happily at home waiting for the sun to shine bright.

Today I have been learning How to DRAFT and Stretch out Sentences with my partner Mere. We have used DRAFT for our writing. When we are Stretching out our Sentences, We learnt that you can use the 5 w's.

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